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Open Poetry #44

Empyrean

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-05-07 02:12 AM

When will time be on our side?
my heart is weary, my eyes are full,
tears are welling up inside,
This ache , needs its cure,

Sorry if I must be selfish,
words are not enough,
sustaining me once, now,
the desire for more,

Drives me to insanity,
my bottle is empty,
my tomb is cold,
my heart grows faint,

Oh sun, of beautiful warmth,
cloak me with your love,
my heart echoes in stillness,
quietness surrounds me,

Torch these demons of loneliness,
opened winged angel fly,
Into the arms of midnight,
carry me to where you are,

Fading into the cloudy mist,
beyond celestial fountains,
tiny flickers of spark,
tingle my feet,

Kiss me into forever,
eat my soul,
one , together,
where time cannot restrain,

nor love have any bounds,
for love such as this,
is limitless, just as the stars,
you are my salvation,

I fall to your mercy.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-05-07 04:14 AM

I can feel your heart writhing in this very romantic piece so full of uncontainable yearning.

Beautifully done.

Love,
Margherita

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2009-05-07 08:45 AM

Very beautiful poem. I could feel the yearning within it.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

3 posted 2009-05-07 09:13 PM

Your desperate desire was beautifully impressed upon my heart, and I yearn just as deeply for you.

I love you, never forget that, my love.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

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