Open Poetry #44 |
I love it when |
MissAnnonymous New Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 5Derbyshire, England |
I'm sure most people have been through something like this at least once in their lives. I love it when you say my name And when you hold my hand I love it when we're at the beach Making castles with the sand I love it when you make me laugh with all the jokes you tell I love it when I found out that in love with you I fell I love it when you always say what I need to hear I love it when I feel sick so you always stay here I love it when you hold me and make me feel secure I love it when I need you here then you turn up at my door I love it when you do the small things that show me how much you care I love it when we go away just you and me somewhere I love it when I look at you and I get butterflies But then you said you dont love me and theres a part of me that died Tell me what it was that I did wrong that made you walk out on me Tell me why you have changed your mind Cos I love you, can't you see I try to tell myself that I dont care but my heart knows that I do Back then, you and me became we now it's back to just me and you I know you know you're my everything and I have loved you since day one You once told me that you loved me too so tell me why you've now gone I loved it when you said my name and when you held my hand But like your mind the times have changed and from your heart i'm banned |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww....it starts out so sweet...then gets so sad... almost like two poems in one. yes, I'm sure many can relate |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
Welcome to Passions, MissAnn... This is a very nice poem - I enjoyed and I'm pleased to see another Miss among us! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll second that! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Oh such sweet poetry. I am so sorry for the ending. Enjoyed Ariana |
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