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Open Poetry #44

Man who doesn't exist

MissAnnonymous
New Member

since 2009-05-06

Posts 5
Derbyshire, England

0 posted 2009-05-06 11:49 AM

Fit
Charming
Kind
Funny

Everything you said you were.
I believed you.
Ok, I'll be fair,
Maybe I told a little lie too.

Blonde
Skinny
Confident
Pretty

You're not you
And I'm not me
We both believed it was true
Because we wanted it to be

Belief
Trust
Desire
Fantasy

Mind, erupting like a volcano
Sending signals around the body.
Telling the heart
To beat faster
The butterflies
To go crazy
Overflowing with thoughts

Lust

Love

You.

It might be wrong,
It might be foolish.
But now, I'm in love
With a man who doesnt exist.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-05-06 11:55 AM

I think that happens a lot online... but then... it happens face to face, too. It's hard to know when you're seeing just what someone wants you to see.

I enjoyed this... Welcome to Passions! *S*

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-05-06 12:06 PM

Funny, I fit a lot of these lines in your poem. I am not telling which ones though.
some things are best left to the imagination

Nice first post.
Welcome to the worlds greatest addiction.

Tracey.

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