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To Baby, in Atonement
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To Baby, in Atonement |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas 
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Tonight your little cheek is wet With glistening baby tears, And baby heartbreaks hurt as much As ours in later years... But,oh! My sweet, tomorrow When you waken with the dawn, You'll find that sorrow's sped away And baby woes are gone! Yet I who watch above you In that alchemy of sleep, Know a deeper bit of heartache, For...'twas I who made you weep! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Heh. Yeah, I've had these moments and how poetic they are..really. I like this a lot. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
perfectly phrased, my friend....well done. j. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A finer or more tender poem of atonement, I have not read!   EA |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Kaoru.... Thank you for your comment, it is appreciated. Regards. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
jwesley... Thank you very much,I'm glad you found it worthy. Regards. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Earth Angel... Thank you for your kind comments, glad you enjoyed it and found it meaningful to you. Regards. |
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