Open Poetry #44 |
The Hidden One. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Come, let me take you by the hand; I'll lead you to a secret place where dwells the hidden one, who seldom feels the sun upon his face. Come tip-toe past dark memories that echo down these shadowy halls, be not afraid... you will not stumble, I will catch you, if you fall. Within this labyrinth of sorrow, strewn about with shattered dreams, discover now, the secret one... for naught is ever as it seems. The lost romantic, pierced by evils selfish cynics say and do; His words of love quite out of fashion; used by all... meant by so few. His woven words, spun soft and gentle have no place... cannot succeed, in a world of subterfuge, mendacity, and naked greed. What happened to the childhood truths once taught, with patience, and, with care? Shed carelessly, with scant remembrance; damage, words cannot repair. Remember then, the hidden one, who, in the darkness, must remain, shackled to his empathy; he knows the sorrow and the pain; and, turning back with eyes unseeing, snuffs the flame he tried to free; his words... no more than sparrow's tears in a sea of brash cupidity. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is one of your best, Dave. I sometimes feel like "The Hidden One" myself. Ida |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
a smidge on the dark side....almost feels like a chant. Very nicley written, thanx for sharing it! |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
You're never one to disappoint your reader. You always deliver; another fine poem. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me want to read it by candle light a pleasure |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
His words of love quite out of fashion; used by all... meant by so few. But when they are meant, they're all the more appreciated. *S* This is so beautiful, my friend! *S* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply EXCELLENT ! long-sustained applause for this fine 'penning'!! [very effective photo. image also] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Gorgeous write Sir! ~ Very mystical and peaceful pic ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Top accolades for this one Dave, You are very clever with words my friend. Enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
this is nice Lana |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Sir Dave Of Camelot , I for one, am listening to your words, they are not falling on deaf ears, nor a deaf heart....nor are they hidden.. such a pleasure to see you write in this character as well.... You never know the depths of love, until you discover the depths of pain~ me ~ARH |
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