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qtangel812
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0 posted 2009-05-02 01:32 PM



The dark tunnel had no end

Left with a broken heart that would not mend

I could not see any light from where I stood

The stars were gone from my sky

Then you came and every thing was right again

I thought of you as my angel with healing hands

The holes in my heart were gone

Though your love I knew, I did not deserve

I could never imagine a day without you

I thank the heavens for giving mi angel to brighten my day

My love I know that in my heart you will always stay

My angel it is thanks to you that I am a better person today


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2009-05-02 11:10 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Heartfelt verse, well written.  

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-05-03 02:31 PM


Welcome to Pip!

Lovely first entry.

Love,
Margherita

qtangel812
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3 posted 2009-05-04 09:32 PM


thnx it this is the first poem i wrote :]
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4 posted 2009-05-05 08:40 AM


Welcome to Passions... I look forward to reading more of your work! *S*
Heart2Heart
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5 posted 2009-05-15 12:32 PM


A precious poem and joy to read.
Heart2Heart

Kaoru
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6 posted 2009-05-15 12:43 PM


Well done! Welcome to pip!
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