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In Dreams...I Fly
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In Dreams...I Fly |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
In dreams... I shape shift into an eagle and cast my shadow over canyons and valleys below, over forests and mountains covered with snow. In dreams... I unfurl my bat wings and soar into the night, beyond the edge of darkness into the cosmic light. In dreams... I flutter my fairy wings and gift little children with wishes and dreams. The magical things that are what they seem. Ida Werrett [This message has been edited by Marchmadness (05-02-2009 02:52 PM).] |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
ah I thought that was you in my dreams ::smiles:: nice quite nice |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done Ida...Not too shabby...not at all. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Ida, how lovely is this! One of my very favorite of yours. I also fly in dreams and I understand what it feels like! Fly on ... one day we might meet above the Alps or above the Gran Canyon ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, This is one of my favorites too. It's wonderful and shows your imagination - may I fly with you? Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most fine imagery ... lovely 'write' ! I'd love to find some: "magical things (and a few people) that are what they seem(!)" MUCH applause for this 'penning' !! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...beautifully descriptive...so, pleasant dreams....you describe them well |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Lovely thoughts well done. Enjoyed very much. Regards. |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
Visually such a lovely poem. I especially like the ending lines...that they are what they seem...without complexity or hidden meanings...enjoyed the read~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely dreams, good to fly in dreams, very enjoyable. regards yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear Ida Belle, may I join you on your flights?!? Pretty please with honey all over it?  This was magical! The image of the eagle casting its shadow "over canyons and valleys below,over forests and mountains covered with snow." ~ was stunning! I could see it and the vision was awesome! You are a talented and multi-faceted writer ~ and spirit! Love & Spirit Light Flight, Linda  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful dreams your having!!! I really loved reading you're thoughts, Ida~ |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I love this, Ida. I've had dreams of flying before, myself. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
To night wings and fairy dust! I have not soared for a while, but you took on a dream journey in this one... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for your responses, I have been very busy dealing with some health issues and haven't been on the site much lately. It was a happy surprise to see this one return. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Ah, a sweet madness, I love the enchantment of your words, Bloodline |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Ida, Very magical and creative, dreamy~ My kind of poem~ ~ARH |
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