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One of my fave I AMs...a repost if I may....
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One of my fave I AMs...a repost if I may.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I am... Waters that rage before the flood bathes. The shore that casts the waves into the seas. The light that shimmers upon the lake’s edge. the tear that glistens an eye. You are... The fountain that sprinkles a symphony. The coo of a mourning dove. The whisper that calls me. The moon that bathes my soul. We are... Flowers blooming upon the vine. Wine’s sparkle behind a crystal shell. A flake of snow, landing lightly upon a lid. A water’s drip before the fall spills. I am... The love that bubbles endlessly. The rush of cheeks in a roses blush. The cavern’s silence beneath a starry sky. An owls cry before the dawn. And as the day swallows the stars, as comets trace the pillow of darkness...As mountains move toward the seas...I am here.... Forever in love... With you... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Once in a while I see a romantic poem that I truly enjoy, This is the one. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Absolutely beautiful! Thank you for re-posting it. Helen |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I loved this then I love this now I will keep it so I can love it now and then. I will even place a link to it in my "Rumi" collection. It has that feel Thank you for this. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As beautiful today, as the first day you wrote this. A favorite of mine.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Barry, I love that you didn't follow the format that was created for us. I love that you broke off on your own and showed your inner self. I love this lots. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"And as the day swallows the stars, as comets trace the pillow of darkness...As mountains move toward the seas...I am here.... Forever in love... With you..." such a beautiful love, Barry.  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, my dear Magnanimous One, I have just added your favourite "I AM" poem to my list of "fav I AMs" as well!!!  Absolutely gorgeous is both sentiment and form! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Barry, this is poignantly beautiful. So happy you reposted it for us to enjoy now again. Totally after my heart. Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
It's been so long since I've read one of your poems, and I fall into this one eye-deep! Thank you for the repost. Heartfelt and lovely... ~Karen |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
A very, special poem. Would make for an excellent reading at a wedding, as it is an outstanding declaration of love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly beautiful, my friend... I love the ending! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write, my friend...wonderful read. j. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"And as the day swallows the stars, as comets trace the pillow of darkness...As mountains move toward the seas...I am here.... Forever in love... With you..." Beautiful!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you for sharing this...I love the resolution of this one...very, very nice |
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