Open Poetry #44 |
I Am Imaginative and Silly (Ringo's "I Am" Challenge) |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I AM I am imaginative and silly. I wonder if the sky really goes on forever I hear clouds gossiping as they drift I see shoodle-doodles dance through my window pane I want to give a home to all stray animals I see I am imaginative and silly. I pretend that my cats and dogs really converse with me I feel that fairies dance under the moon I touch their translucent wings I worry that imagination is being stifled by technology I cry over hurt and lost animals I am imaginative and silly. I understand that I am loved I say lumpy oatmeal really does make me crazy I dream of living in the old house that I grew up in I try to be kind and less outspoken I hope I share the magic of “pretend” I am imaginative and silly. * shoodle-doodles are the dust particles that dance in sun beams. That was my name for them when I was a toddler and it stuck in my family. - Alison ~ shoodle-doodle lover [This message has been edited by Alison (05-02-2009 12:38 PM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Alison, this cute and imaginative, I enjoyed very much this poem and its deep lightness and images. have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, Alison. Now I know what to call those little dust particles. Ida |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
You are a good person an identity! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
YAY, Shoodle-doodles!!!! Thanks for writing. But this one goes to eleven... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and who wouldn't love a shoodle-doodle lover?!? I enjoyed learning a bit more about you, Ms Ali Boop! ~ and ta knows ya is ta luvs ya! You're as cute and cuddly as all of your animals! ~ stuffed and otherwise! lol Love you! Lindy Lou |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, It's all right to be both imaginative and silly. It's also more fun. Love Bobby |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Glad to know you, Alison. I loveya just the way you are. I see you are an animal lover, just like me. It would be nice to have a place where we could take in all the strays. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Imagination is the creator and silliness the stabilizing factor because without it we may go crazy! Thank you for this look within - lovely view! Helen |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
"If you aint crazy, something's wrong with you" --- Willie Nelson ::smiles:: You are a delightful little shoodle-doodle |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well done! I am especially fond of: I wonder if the sky really goes on forever" and: I hear clouds gossiping as they drift" "I worry that imagination is being stifled by technology" In addition to the 3 R's ... I believe we need also worry about the vanishing 3 C's in (alleged) 'education' ... Curiosity; Creativity; and Common sense! ... applause for this 'penning' !! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are a complete delight... and so is this self-portrait! *S* I love the thought of shoodle-doodles dancing! *S* |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ala-hoon, You are the bomb. Yours, truly, -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Love this. Is the 'I Am' challenge new? Funny, cause I just wrote an 'I Am' the other day...lol. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
It's "silly" you that brought me into the 'I AM' sillys....after reading this ... well, why not.... Loved it, j. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I hear clouds gossiping as they drift" enjoyed this view of you and the shoodle doodles |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love the shoodle-doodle and off course love the poem. Thanks for sharing! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This description fits your smile so perfectly, dear Alison! Of course the list could go on with still more magic to enjoy, I feel. You are such a cute girl and poetess. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, Thank you, my friend. Your comments always bring me joy. Alison - Ida, Yep, shoodle-doodles! Thank you lots. xoxoxo Alison - Kushal, Thank you. It's always a wonderful thing to see that you have stopped in. Alison - Hey Ringo, Thank you for bringing this challenge back. It's fun to participate in and read all the others. Alison - Linda, I have been thinking of you lately. Thank you. You have a basketful full of wonderful that you sprinkle about our pages. Love, Alison - Bobby, Yep, Bobby. You are right on both counts. Thank you. Alison - Hey Uriah, Thanks and backatcha! Ali - Bruce, I so agree with you about the 3 C's. Great point - I hope we are wrong in what we are seeing. Alison - Ruth, Wanna dance among them with me? Thank you lots. xoxoxo Alison - Tina, Thank you, beautiful one. I think Ringo ressurected this challenge and I am so glad he did. Love, Alison - jimmy, Thank you. Silly is good, I believe. xoxox Alison - Thank you, dear vandana. A - Thanks, SEA. It makes me happy to see you become a believer in shoodle-doodles! xoxoxo Alison - Charisma, Thank you. It's nice to meet you and I appreciate you reading. Alison - Margherita, You bring joy with every response. Love, Alison |
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