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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * You are ... You are my Gregorian chant when the trees are our cathedral. You are my Om sound, when we perform our very own cosmic dance. Occasionally, you are my Blues, when we cross the valleys of universal sadness. Mostly, you are my unique tune of love that stirs my every fiber to move through life with grace. You are my string of existence that holds every sound ever emitted in the process of creation. You are the divine voice that resonates within my soul, hence this irresistible desire to get under your skin, to dive into the essence of you. You are the buzzing of our Spring meadow where we inhale the pure breeze of renovation that allows us to live in love and to ascend upon planes of peace and healing of whatever dissonance crept imperceptibly into our minds. Now come and sing with me, over and over again, our unique tune of harmony. Then press your lips on mine and listen to the echoes roaming through infinity. * |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..you do love songs with very special notes...a pleasure to read you |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
What a lovely expression of completeness! I truly enjoy your writing. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Much enjoyed read indeed Margherita, good to read your poems again. Oh! Lovely flowers too.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well bless your sweet, loving soul!!! Maga Margherita is back! Gosh, I've MISSED you!!!! ~ and what a beauty you have penned on this auspicious day of my Dolphina's return!     Linda ~ Angelo Terrestre |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are the divine voice that resonates within my soul, hence this irresistible desire to get under your skin, to dive into the essence of you. This is absolutely beautiful, my friend! *S* To read it is to feel spirits lifting. *S* |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
It is innocent. And therefore touched by God. trees are our cathedral. You are my Om sound, when we perform ... what a depiction clever talks delay friendship! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A beautiful poem written by a truly beautiful lady. Going back for another read to get my heart around your words - again!  Helen |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Margherita You left me breathless... Heather |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This is amazing! I need to sing this to my hubby ... ooxx __________________________ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Tunes of harmony are always good for everyone. Love Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love your style of writing...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Now come and sing with me, over and over again, our unique tune of harmony. Then press your lips on mine and listen to the echoes roaming through infinity. Dear Margherita, what can I say, you are like good wine, you are getting better with age. A beautiful poem dear Lady, love Lindsay |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Margherita - This was exquisite! You captured the dance of love with flawless acuity. I'll have what she's having... :-) Indigo |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear friend i lived the best moment whith your poem it carries most wonderful feelings discovers magnificence of your feelings thank you Margherita we hope more love nourzihane |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My dear friend i lived the best moment whith your poem it carries most wonderful feelings discovers magnificence of your feelings thank you Margherita we hope more love nourzihane |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - what a very nice romantic writing, you did well... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for your heartwarming replies! Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"You are my string of existence that holds every sound ever emitted in the process of creation." ...nice line in a very beautiful write |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely, is the picture of happiness you paint dear lady. Enjoyed |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Thanks Rick Rick A. Delmonico |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You write lovely with the pen of a Master. Love, Alison |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Margherita, This is an endearing poem. I find the musical references to be very well-executed. Kudos to you. Mark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful flowers! Love this verse, well, I love all of it but this one hit me. You are the buzzing of our Spring meadow where we inhale the pure breeze of renovation that allows us to live in love and to ascend upon planes of peace and healing of whatever dissonance crept imperceptibly into our minds. Interesting how the beautiful mind of a poet works. Eric |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"Mostly, you are my unique tune of love that stirs my every fiber to move through life with grace. You are my string of existence that holds every sound ever emitted in the process of creation" So beautifully penned.!! enjoyed every word! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow, my friend, truly beautiful. An honor to have read it. And an excellent photo too - wonderful composition. j. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I know I read this....and thought I had commented on it, because it is so full of the evidence that love is what makes life bloom. The connections are vibrant and you leave me smiling at the giving. Karen |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
The sounds of love, delivered with quality and passion. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
love those "echoes roaming infinity" ! fine Romanticism! much applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magnificent, Glorious Margherita! ~ You sure knocked the socks of poets in this one. Poetically delicious ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My dear Poet friends, a warm thank you to each of you, for your uplifting, generous and kind comments. Have a wonderful and creative day! Love, Margherita |
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