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Solace (with Ctowen)
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Solace (with Ctowen) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Solace sing me to ease a ballad of wings, heavenly tirra-lirra soft iridescence ecru caress on waterlogged sky the chant in the doves' release over burdens of deed, the crowning of Cloverdale, of pittance, of comforting spirits the laying of hands, like wings on grimaced brow and heavy heart o joyful solace sweet peace, the light of the dream |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
heaven |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
WOW! This left moist the lips and the eyes. You blend so very well, you two. Awesome write!  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Very nice. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Solace with Ctowen sounds pretty "tirra-lirra" wonderful to me!   Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, yes they very well do blend magnificently. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - suberb writing, as you do... Nice together write... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully blended poetic masterpiece. Love, Margherita |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you all for giving us the chance to catch your eye and perhaps add a sparkle or two .... Helen, you said it all! Chris, I'm blushing and I am sure INK is smiling! Linda, life is not but a dream : ) Magnus, thank you friend for your reply |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
This sings in it's expressive beauty. Stunning. Heather |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you. My pleasure to work with Craig again. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Heavenly lullaby for the heavy of heart, to lift it "like wings..." to shake the dust from one's feet and feel trouble melt away. Very soft read, a lovely place to bask. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It was a pleasure as well for me, one now caught in time! Collective performances!! thanks everyone once again! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You guys created such a piece that I, personally, saw darkness, light, despair and peace all in one.. It may not have been your intended message, but it struck me in such a way. Beautiful work, you two. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...a very nice synergy...really liked this part: "ecru caress on waterlogged sky" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the laying of hands, like wings on grimaced brow and heavy heart lovely writing M |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A sweet blending of minds and talent bringing us the peace in the end. Wonderful collaboration you two. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Once more into the breech ..... up, up and away! : ) "You don't have to go |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
burdens of deed... intelligent piece. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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