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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-05-01 10:28 AM

Heartbroken I Withdrew

Wanting to hide my tears
A quite place I always go
Alone I can cry for hours
No one shall ever know

Sadness would be hidden
As I remained out of sight
Tears of sorrow are wept
As I hug my pillow tight

Yearning cannot be heard
Heartache lingers silently
Many times I shed tears
Which no one shall see

Here I do my crying alone
My face hidden from view
With tears on my pillow
Heartbroken I withdrew

Hope©2009

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2009-05-02 10:58 PM

Hope you are far to lovely a lady to feel so sad, count up all the good things you

have in life and I'm sure you will feel a lot better, think positive my friend. love

Lindsay

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-05-03 12:53 PM

I understand...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-05-03 12:56 PM

HopeS - sadness is in your pen, but happiness is just behind it. Wishing you well...

BC

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-05-03 08:34 PM

HopeS,

Such a sad and beautiful poem. The graphic is lovely and the words and font perfect on it. Your poem takes the stage and makes me just relax into the heartbreak.

Lovely combination of poem and graphic.

Alison

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2009-05-04 04:39 AM

Sighing here, and touched by the strength of your heart, caught in the inky droplets.... ~K

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2009-05-04 07:25 AM

Many times I shed tears
Which no one shall see
Sometimes, even while gardening, I will play some music and let the tears flow~~ don't care if anyone sees or not. It's the release that sometimes is needed whatever the reason.

M

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2009-05-05 06:39 PM

And now we know.
So sad but so understandable penned.
thank you for sharing.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2009-05-05 06:43 PM

You've said it for all of us Hope, in a wonderfully touching way.

j.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2009-05-05 07:38 PM

Hope, you have so touchingly voiced the feelings of those of us who understand...

Love to you, sweet poetess!

Linda

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