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Open Poetry #44

Inside of a mad mind

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2009-04-30 09:05 AM

Inside of a mad mind

Trapped inside the head of a mad man
a parrot is searching for a sky to float.
I can heed; for I am the man of course.

Won’t you have joined me in sky watching
while digging in a pot of ambrosia
which you would have brought me and which I
might not doubt as poison as you’ve poisoned
the river, the air with factories and wastes?

Won’t you share the disarrayed thoughts
we both have grown when you fired me
from a job for economy? Won’t you
say, it shall all be okay in time?

The mad man’s parrot flies out to and fro.
Screams and accuses. Sits on the branches of the dark forest.
© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-04-30 04:57 PM

Dear Ku, this reflects so powerfully the results of the global crisis that has left so many in desperate situations. No, you can't trust what you are given from people who have only their own material interests in mind and don't care for the others or for the preservation of Nature.

Humanity needs to awaken to Love and justice to mend what has been perpetrated til now.

Thank you for this impressive work.

Love,
Margherita

SeraphimBroken
Member

since 2009-03-09

Posts 74
USA

2 posted 2009-04-30 05:08 PM

Well Spoken! it's a "mad mad" world.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-05-01 07:27 PM

Intense powerful imagery that highlights the current global crisis. Ambrosia should be a treat, never a threat.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2009-05-01 07:51 PM

ah (((mad mind))) fun thought
enjoy !

I have never known a bird who ran out of sky.

enjoyed

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-05-01 08:23 PM

Yo Poddarku,

I'm sure things will work out well in the future. They always do you know.

Bobby

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