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touch of palm--with Mark Bohannan
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touch of palm--with Mark Bohannan |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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The embrace of Luna wrapped the night In arms illuminated by our touch of palm The flame of passion rose to new height As embers of discovery introduced calm First rain dreams birth September recall Where we met greeting dawns pure sky Untainted love answered by standing tall With first breath of kiss in lingering sigh Always daring the moon to pull the dark The dark of silhouettes in delicate trace Whose hands have touched silken mark And spell of smoke on constellations lace The courtship of eyes waltz on high tide Glistening on horizon of intimate recline Whispers of tease flirt in cautious pride Between fingers in roam to touch divine I inhale while my mouth searches for fire My trail in the warmth of your skin found That I might find you still kissed in desire By a touch of my pressed palms in sound ~ Whispering to my soul ~ Be not the stranger of my heart in flight Reduced to such ember I have breathed Each shadow and root hidden from night In night of you my hearts amber retrieved Should I find that warmth embodied deep Allowing the essence of love become me May I dance again ... leaving me to sleep Between hands of night making a decree Hearts erupt in quiver to release of surge Massaging drape of eyes searching sky As heaven and embrace begin to merge When two souls collapse in smiling sigh ~~**~~ I never let one moment define me, I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-30-2009 09:14 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James - Thank you and glad you enjoyed. Lauren - What can I say.... I really enjoyed writing this with you but even more so I have to admit that I am smiling seenig your name attached to a "rhyme".  Thanks again for the opportunity.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery and Romanticism ... a pleasure to read! sustained applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very romantic and great imagery! I love when you two write duets. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your words are exquisite, your thoughts romantic, your writing impeccable, well done you two... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bravissimo! My word! ~ I mean, YOUR words!!! You two bring it 'ahn'! Can you see/hear my own smiling sigh?!?  Linda |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey thanks for the sweet replies..... tis a pleasure to write again, and to have such great inspire!  -s ~~**~~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark... such a great teacher, and so patient with me...hugssss ..possibly the first rhyme I've ever done....but I learned, so Im thanking you for that, and for the words....  ~~**~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now wasn't that just a rhyme sublime. You two duet well together. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you all so much for your replies. They are appreciated much. Lauren, again I thank you and I also learned much from you.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yes you two "do it" well together...(don't go there I was talking about writing) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dark - Now I would never be the one to accuse you of going there. I knew exactly what you meant. Thank you kindly sir. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
vandana - Thank you so much. It is always a pleasure to see your name here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and romantic... you two weave your words wonderfully! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ruth - Thank you dearly. Can you believe I got the greeneyed girl to do a rhyme? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent colab.! You both always make the most of it, always have... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There are so many great captivating lines in this beautiful poem. The pleasure you felt in creating it, is felt. Compliments to both. Love, Margherita |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love the imagery and what a great piece you two wrote here. Loved it! Theresia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A sweet seduction. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you all very much for your wonderful replies. They are all very much appreciated. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I've wondered if the day would come, lol! A great piece of work and I am certain not that hard of a struggle, it was always there for Lauren to rhyme in time. I applaude! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So many wonderful lines filled with eloquent expressions. I really got lost in them all but these two hit me right on the poetic comprehension button. Whispers of tease flirt in cautious pride Between fingers in roam to touch divine However, I loved it all. You both should be very pleased with the results you have accomplished. Eric |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ctowen- hey there, thank you for stopping by and signing your name, such a smile it adds... ethome-- appreciate the lines you touched on, thank you much... hugsss and luv to all thank you... ~~**~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Craig - I think we all wondered and I am proud to have been a part of it. Sort of a milestone . Thank you kindly sir.Eric - You have one of those buttons too??? LOL I always appreciate you comments sir and the fact you let us know the lines that touched that button. Thank you with much appreciation and respect for you comments. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just saving to library. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
A sensual duet filled with evocative imagery and soft sign moans. Well written you two! Indigo |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
an excellent collaboration by two of PIP's finest...why am I not surprised?  |
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