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Open Poetry #44

Angel in Disgrace

Eirian
Member

since 2009-04-13

Posts 70

0 posted 2009-04-28 01:11 PM

A cry in the night
A lone man sings
A heart wrenching sound
An Angel clipped of her wings

A tearing of the soul
A tear streaked face
A heart lying broken
An Angel in disgrace

A lover absconded
A lover scorned
A beauty bereft
An Angel unadorned

A darkness encroaching
A numbing of the heart
A deadening of the soul
An Angel torn apart

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-04-28 01:36 PM

So very sad... and lovely! *S*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-04-28 01:40 PM

Delicately penned ~ but effectively portraying the heaviness of a grieving heart.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2009-04-28 02:34 PM

Oh now. That's good. I like the way you arranged this one, I like the building feel. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

4 posted 2009-04-28 09:35 PM

This delicate poem was lovely Eirian.

No man has the power to clip an angel of her wings though, she'll always fly again.

Eirian
Member

since 2009-04-13

Posts 70

5 posted 2009-04-28 11:45 PM

Thank you all so much for you comments.

Luke, I sense something more to yours?

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