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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England

0 posted 2009-04-26 04:44 AM




A School Girls Romantic dreams

Are you trying to elude me?
now that we are no longer close
I thought that maybe we could be friends
or is our love story for ever closed,

I try not to think of the way we were
all cozy and wrapped in our world
until the day you left me
to hold hands with another girl,

You said, we would love for ever
that day in the meadows soft fading light
you said that we would marry
I cold not sleep at all that night,

But today in the middle of the playground
I saw you kiss that new girl
How could you be so shallow
I hate you for shattering my world

Tony said he liked me today
maybe we could be more than just friends
to hell with mike and the new girl
I think with Tony I am on the mend..

Annie
24-04-2009

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critical mass
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since 2009-03-25
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Michigan
1 posted 2009-04-26 06:28 PM


Great comeback.

Everybody goes thru this a time or two.

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
2 posted 2009-04-27 08:10 AM


Thank you for responding..
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2009-04-29 01:05 AM


Enjoyed...James
Anniepimm
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4 posted 2009-04-29 08:02 AM


Thank you very much James
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-04-29 09:40 AM


now you see why I am still in school...enjoyed it annie
Anniepimm
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6 posted 2009-04-29 10:35 AM


Awww bless I wish I was but I am to old now I left school in 1970   that means I am very old
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