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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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No one On this soft spring evening of astonishing serenity, the past is viewed only as in pale moonlight through old glass and phantasmic memories ringing with overwhelming melancholy through a wasted heart and disconsolate spirit... eternally forsaken by all love and compassion. --- b. e. adams (4/26/2009) |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Starts out really nice then ends up really sad I like it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Extreme melancholy, finely contrasted against "soft spring evening of astonishing serenity". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, you explore the very depth of melancholy here, but I am glad you perceived the serenity too. Balance is what we need. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Thoughtfully worded from just that place in the heart. |
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