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Little Angels |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Little Angels The Foliage unfolds From the tender green beads Upon the finger tips Of naked white oak trees Mundane parts of our lives Seem far too beautiful Like when lilac trees bloom With the smell of roses Why? -Juju |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Nice poem. Lilac and roses are a pretty good smell combined. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Alluring nature! Enjoyed this. Love, Margherita |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Find the wonder in the simple. I really, really, really enjoyed this. won-da-faaaa. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Juju. I especially like the imagery in the fist verse. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. You're a poet Juju Never doubt that . . . John . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Magical visuals and a great message to ponder. Good job, Juju~ |
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