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You Are A Role Model
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You Are A Role Model |
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Amalie New Member
since 2009-04-08
Posts 4 |
I wrote this for one of my close friends. But I would like your thoughts on it too  You are a role model Your struggles Stream like the river Like the tears in your eyes They fall as crystals The crystal you are Shining bright Like the wisdom in your heart Your ARE a role model The shackles have gone loose Unlike your values That stand tall Elevated with pride Your smile shines bright A reflection of the continuous fight With your past Your smile shines bright A reflection of your future Free of trouble Enriched in endless potential It is your birthday So celebrate the life You are going to build You will enter with glory From here on out You are Abbyn Warsame! A beautiful Glorious Dignified Soulful Woman With shoulders full of Experience and Wisdom |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Nice tribute to your friend Amalie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It is your birthday So celebrate the life You are going to build I like this... and think she will, too! *S* |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Your ARE a role model The shackles have gone loose Unlike your values That stand tall Elevated with pride How could she not like those wonderful words Amalie, I thought they were great, Take care |
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