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Soul Eater |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Brokeness, I am, among the darkness, is where I hide, Addictions, pain, choking you, stealing your breath, In the shadows, dark, deepness, consumeing your soul, tempting you, desireing your life, all or nothing, anger, hurt, murder, envy, hate, oh how I feast on these, Give me more, allow me to grow, in your bowels, The deepest recesses of your heart, balck as pitch, you fall for my beliefs, that you have the power, the knowledge, a puppet on a string, my puppet, I control, I am power, when you destroy yourself, I win, I am the winner, come to me, allow me to take you, to where you will never return, allow me to steal your last breath, for I am death...... |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Death is not necessarily a bad thing, living to kill youself sure is. This sounds more like the Devil talking than Death. I don't look forward to dying, but I am not afraid of death. (Heaven help me) Very powerful poem, Well done. Tracey. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
well the devil can be the bad death, so it could be the devil and death, the devil steals your life, while you are alive....wanting you to meet death. thanks! ~ARH |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I see you've joined in the dark gauntlet I threw down with Azrael. And I think you've done it excellently. We both have some darkness in our hearts, but we accept those parts of each other because we love each other. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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