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norunnin Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 71 |
I am the guy who never tried to get close, but when he got close he gave up the ghost. So lets give a toast to a terrible friend, doomed to a wicked end. My story is the same as any others, the only difference being that i am like no other. i am in love and my love loves me but we can never be, do you see. She is with he who brings the fast money. I can never make her mine because i do not find the reason nor the rhyme to make that fast money through crime. He is a friend named _tan. we went through the thick but never through the thin. She is a beautiful saint, attributes magnified with just a bit of taint. She said she would choose to be with me if things perfect could be, but we, well there is no we, she denies me. What am i to do with me? what will be will be. and i loathe myself while loving myself while wondering how it is to be loved by someone else. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Norunnin, This is an interesting write, I might try to break it down into verse or stanzas, but that's just me. enjoyed. Tracey. |
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