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Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2009-04-24 03:45 PM

I cannot think that you
Will ever forget...
For in some hidden recess
Of your being,
Dusty by time's neglect,
Tarnished by forgotten tears,
Abides still
Remembrance.
And though your eyes
Be shut upon it,
And your heart closed
Against it,
It shall sometimes wake
At night,
And whisper low...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-04-24 03:51 PM

Poignant piece, gently written.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

2 posted 2009-04-24 03:58 PM

Midnitesun...

Thank you for your kind response, it is most appreciated.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2009-04-24 07:22 PM

I often think of them, those of my past, and wonder if they do the same?

How easy is it to forget one you truely loved, or that you know loved you?

Very nice write.
Tracey.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

4 posted 2009-04-24 08:03 PM

This reminded me painfully of my fiancee who passed away from a heroin overdose when I was seventeen.

Nevertheless, it was an articulate and poignant poem.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-04-24 10:40 PM

A poignant and gentle poem, Rex.
Ida

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

6 posted 2009-04-25 10:55 AM

Midnitesun....

Thank you, your comments are appreciated.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

7 posted 2009-04-25 10:58 AM

WTBAKELAR...

Thank you, I appreciate your comments.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

8 posted 2009-04-25 10:59 AM

Suncleaver...

Thanks and sorry for your loss.

Regards.

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

9 posted 2009-04-25 11:06 AM

Marchmadness...

Thank you, glad that you enjoyed this one.

Regards.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2009-04-27 10:04 AM

I like this very much... beautiful write!!

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

11 posted 2009-04-27 10:59 AM

Suthern...

Thank you very much for your comment. I appreciate your input.

Regards.

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