Open Poetry #44 |
Azrael (Let's see who's the darkest Linda) |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Abysmal mankind's sins have fed My hunger deep for restless dead, Each hourglass shattered, crushed in greed Has nourished God's avenging seed. A scythe I bear, and cup of grief To winnow men from false belief That fortress walls they hide within Will guard their souls from wage of sin. A single flame of cold hellfire Within each eye doth mark my ire, The raven wings from days of yore, And crimson waves of tears of war. I reap the crop of sinner's souls To burn upon the tempter's coals And scream their last in tortured flame, My aspect grim and death my name. The seraph of bleakest abode, The bridge of death I have bestrode, A maelstrom swept across the land, This day is planned and ye are damned! |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
As I said before, the imagery in this work is stunning. I stand in awe of you dear friend. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That's how I like my fire and brimstone, Suncleaver. Terrifying with a touch of class. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Luke, you win! You be the master of the macabre! lol Great write! Mind you, this 'angel of the Light' is quivering in her vestments! Love & Light ~ with a bit of Dark thrown in to keep life a bit more interesting! lol Linda |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Suncleaver, this was incredible and breathtaking. You and EA inspired me to post some of my 'dark' stuff too. They are fun to write in a way, huh? Or maybe that says something about us. Either way, this was phenomenal. You sir, are very talented. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I reap the crop of sinner's souls To burn upon the tempter's coals And scream their last in tortured flame, My aspect grim and death my name. Okay, OKAY!! I repent! *S* This is intense and fantastic! *S* |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Love these dark poems, the painting is lovely too. I meant very dark. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
How would it be to have your preacher reign this down upon your head on a bright Sunday morning? That's some scary stuff. Tracey. |
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SeraphimBroken Member
since 2009-03-09
Posts 74USA |
dark indeed! well written! I would hate to be the one who didn't let go of your eggo! lol Fantastic writing! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Reminds me of one of my favorite shows Supernatural ~ Spooky and dark indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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