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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-04-23 07:15 PM


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With me
Let no words
Be said

Prattle on
As much as you want
With anyone else
Yet with me
Let there be
Nothing heard

For I am moved
By a doe in the woods
Whose graceful passing
Gives me pause

Be there quietly
As if a spirit
Whose coming
Into my life

Is like a moment
Knowing God


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-04-23 07:22 PM





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2 posted 2009-04-23 08:21 PM


wow...

and wow again!!


Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2009-04-23 10:47 PM


Huan Yi - nicely written...

BC


secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2009-04-26 03:24 PM


especially fine ending!:

"... I am moved
By a doe in the woods
Whose graceful passing
Gives me pause

Be there quietly
As if a spirit
Whose coming
Into my life

Is like a moment
Knowing God"

applause !!

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