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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas 
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Even though, my dearest, even though Dense is the night and silence all I know, Watchfully I wait and in the darkness speak Aloud to you in yearning, and so to seek Rapture in a dream! May God decree Deep in your heart you answer me! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love the opening lines to this and the flow that follows it...nice work... |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Regards. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Rex - This has a lyrical compelling flow that grabs the reader. Only the hand of the poet can reach like that. Very nicely done Rex. Namyh |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Dense is the night and silence all I know, Watchfully I wait and in the darkness speak" ~ In the still of the night ~ You expressed it very well! ... Enjoying this meditative moment.  "Rapture in a dream!" ~ May the answer be "Yes!"  EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rex - nice write, enjoyed it... BC |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
And oh, the longing. I love your writing style... |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Namyh,Earth Angel,Bill Charles,Raindance... Thanks so much for your kind comments, they are much appreciated. Sorry for the joint response today but time is of the essence. Best Regards |
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