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From the Bowels of Hell (rp for Bobby Jordan)
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From the Bowels of Hell (rp for Bobby Jordan) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 From the Bowels of Hell by Linda L. Dowd Galloping across the barren moor, on a snorting, midnite steed, A horseman from the bowels of hell, sought souls on which to feed. Demonic eyes of glowing red, did pierce the dead of night. Searching for its hapless prey, ~ Too mortified to fight. The banshees wailed as evil claimed the souls of man and beast. There trailed behind ~ a river of red, in the wake of voracious feast. An acrid smell assailed the air. The peat was soaked in blood. Those not slashed by wield of sword, were trampled down deep in mud. Galloping across the barren moor on a snorting, midnite steed, A horseman from the bowels of hell, sought souls on which to feed. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-24-2009 01:51 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bobby, there you go! You asked for a poem of mine from the "Dark Side"! lol  Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - ssssccccccaaaaaarrrrrryyyyyy... Yikes..... BC |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
DANG IT, Remind me to stay out of the Boggs, This is very good. Tracey |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Didn't know you had it in you, Linda. Scary stuff, very well done. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Demonic eyes of glowing red, pierced the dead of night. Searching for its hapless victims, ~ Too mortified to fight. Not very friendly man Linda, he looks cools for a bad man. Reminds me of the Ghost rider. A horseman from the bowels of hell. Wow, love it.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not skeered. *G* Really... I'm not... I'm just shivering cuz the AC's too cold in here... honest. *G* Fantastic!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Linda, Thanks for the poem. Now there you go, that's more like it. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Oh, m'dear gentle man, 'tis just my macabre imagination that lets loose once in awhile! lol Boo! ~ and a hug! lol Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I prefer the other side of our Earth Angel but I guess we have to acknowledge the dark to appreciate the light. I hope I'm never "too mortified to fight". Here's to the light!  Helen |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Oh! This is very well done. I hope he does not appear in my dreams. You realy made him come to life. Billie C. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is an absolute killer Linda. And I thought I could be dark... Things to do tomorrow: 1, Acquire midnite steed 2, Acquire ethereal blade 3, Drown mankind in crimson waves of the tears of war. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Honey ~ Into every yang, some yin should fall! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Billie ~ lol Thank you! ~ May you dream sweetly, this night!  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suncleaver ~ Oh! Oh! This time I've gone too far and now more Dark will be brought into the world!  lolGlad you liked it, Luke! Love & LIGHT, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tracey ~ Ooops! I'm replying out of turn! Indeed, dear Tracey! ~ Stay out of those bogs! Evil lurks there! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marchmadness ~ My dear Ida Belle, sometimes I even scare myself! Shiver me timbers! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Prasaad ~ That graphic freaks me out! Eeeek! Brrrr! ~ but it sure as helll, works with this scary poem! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern One ~ Shame on me fer skeering ya and makin' ya shiver! Double shame on me! Now, come sit near the hellfire to get nice and warm ~ VERY warm! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
R.E.J. ~ Glad you liked my offering from the Dark Side! I rather thought you would! lol Love & Light EA |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Demonic eyes of glowing red, did pierce the dead of night. In search for its hapless prey, ~ Too mortified to fight. You beautiful Angel Princess, you never cease to amaze me with your ability to write about so many different things and present them in such faultless style.I am going to do something here that I never do with other people's poems but the rythme of your poems are always so perfect that I couldn't help myself. I inserted prey instead of victims as a single syllable word keeps the meter perfect. I hope you are not offended by me in doing this. Love you dear friend. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lindsay ~ How dare you!!! ~ Just jokin'! Ya knows I lovesya!  No, I don't mind at all! In fact, I did as you suggested and now it flows much better! I appreciate your kind words ~ and your helpful suggestion! Beware the bogs! ~ and the rider from hell! Sending a bubble of protective Light your way! Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ya know EA ~ You sure got me wanting to show you dark lol, I love this, explores many different realms for you Linda. Showing Pip, that you have all types of poetry in your pen! ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks, AW! I could say the same for you, as well! Be wary of what goes bump in the nite in the bogs! EA |
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