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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-04-22 08:15 AM



perhaps it was the introseduction of her smile
that kiss addictable seam that simmered
then infected with words I could have worshiped
if my zentholicism had any chants for panting

she had her best legs on, high heeled heavenly
and made sure I couldn't ignore the stairway
when she nearly needed a helping handsome
or she said I was without her glasses on

so I made sure she lost them at day dreams place
so she would always need my arm to guide her
and wouldn't mind some brail from time to time
if she really wanted to get to know me better

and she did too on occasion, taking me exploring
to find new youth for my well used assets
like they were her first time favorites
and my sinperience was actually better too

since only then could I appreciate her heaven

______________

daark  (forbidden)



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Raindance
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1 posted 2009-04-22 09:06 AM


well used assets
increase in interest...
enjoyed your sinful worship

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-04-22 09:07 AM


thank you raindance
suthern
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3 posted 2009-04-22 01:07 PM


when she nearly needed a helping handsome
or she said I was without her glasses on

so I made sure she lost them at day dreams place
so she would always need my arm to guide her
and wouldn't mind some brail from time to time
if she really wanted to get to know me better

I get lost in your words... and have no wish for a map to aid my exit. *S* This is fantastic! *S*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-04-22 01:16 PM


Ms suthern

Thank you so much lady friend

steavenr
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5 posted 2009-04-22 03:43 PM


what an interesting title...certainly lured me in...your word usage is always amazing, but this one is astounding...excellent write...excellent
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-04-22 04:41 PM


Most humble thanks steavenr
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7 posted 2009-04-22 05:25 PM


"if my zentholicism had any chants for panting"

smiling here
panting
is zen-full

critical mass
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8 posted 2009-04-22 09:19 PM


Everyone has their favorite lines

These are mine.

she had her best legs on, high heeled heavenly
and made sure I couldn't ignore the stairway


Now that's an image.

CM

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9 posted 2009-04-22 10:20 PM


I read.  I liked.  I'll be back.

A

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-04-23 06:20 AM


midnite...thanks so much


__________

cm, humble thanks!!


_______________

ms ali-san, thanks babe, you smile me

Indigo
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11 posted 2009-04-25 02:16 PM


so unrepentant,
she was a non-believer
until the rapture.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2009-04-26 06:56 AM


ms indi...

but she did call to god often
with her most sultry voice..
thanks babe

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