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Evening |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How strange This late at night A bird should sing It is indeed A beautiful tune Even though Because of clouds Without the aid Of stars As if to say I know My time has come The life that’s left Rendered down To what remains Filtered through Final hours— So please Remember me When I was young Pleasing God With outstretched wings Even now Before I’m gone Some are moved . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is very good. I still remember my wings, as I'm sure many of us do. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well written! I am especially fond of the beginning!: "How strange This late at night A bird should sing It is indeed A beautiful tune Even though Because of clouds Without the aid Of stars As if to say I know My time has come(!)" serious applause !! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I always wondered how the birds know it's morning before the sun comes up? HMMMM? Nice write Tracey. |
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