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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Something makes me want to be with you Something real and something true You get under my skin and in my blood Do things to me that nobody ever would Tried to show me what was on your mind To make me feel out of space and time Wanting my lips upon your own Hearing my whispered dry moan Filling your ear, a vibrato of sound And your dark eyes soft and round Looking to the floor for something not there Hands clenching at the reality of empty air A real life fantasy, real in every way Something better than nothing I hear you say Take a deep breath and savor the taste Never again a moment where you waste You make me live a life where everything is so alive Help me feel the senses burning, for years you’ve tried This what you feel comes with no tie knot string Between us, this indefinable something |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Between us, this indefinable something I love the paradox of this... the something that is indefinable is what defines. *S* And I love this poem... your talent truly amazes me. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Between us, this indefinable something" ~ CG, I think you did a masterful job of defining the indefinable!   EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hands clenching at the reality of empty air now that's a painful truth, but then what do I know? I've got a bri-bear...and bearlings! smile |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you guys! "I've got a bri-bear...and bearlings!" Karen, you never cease to confuse me. lol |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
CG, This one touched me - I like it. A |
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