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Coconut Girl Living in Her World
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Coconut Girl Living in Her World |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coconut Girl Living in Her World This girl lives in a world where coconut trees and a sweet ocean breeze kiss her on the cheek in the mornings. Slipping from her cozy bed sliding into her floral bikini the coconut girl is ready for another day of fun in the sun. Waving goodbye to her kitty coconut girl is vibrant and pretty as she emerges from her beach bungalow. Riding the waves drinking lemonade taking a tan spending time with her boyfriend Dan, everything she possibly can to brighten up a beautiful Hawaiian day. JamesLee 30May 2009 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Certainly does sound like a fine day, indeed. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, There you go buddy. Coconut Girl sounds like a lovely person, tell her hello for me. Bobby |
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Shadow Angel Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29New Zealand |
~ hiya James, I'm new here, and new to your poetry this poem kinda takes me back to summers of the 70's and basting ourselves with Tropical Blend coconut oil...lol. I loved the fragrance of it  anyway, really enjoyed your poem, it was light, breezy, and uplifting *hugs* Sasha xx |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James, This is lovely. It's like a slice of Hawaii on an Alaskan summer day. Perfection. A |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sounds pretty good to me James, I just hope she doesn;t get sunburnt. Lindsay |
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