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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-12-29 06:56 AM

I am running along a narrow path
high in the mountains.
Below me...
Lush, green vegetation
as far as I can see,
I run on,
pursuing the winding path before me.
I am a relay runner
and I have a message to deliver.

Ida Werrett

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-12-29 07:44 AM

Hi Ida, this is a vey interesting view about the role of the poet, it is a clever write and somthing to be shared and remembered.

have a nice day

yann

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-12-29 07:47 AM

I'd cherish the chance for a good run along your verdant path, carrying some message to a waiting poetry god above.
Thanks for the thought provoking message you left on Pips pathway today.
Enjoyed this much, Ida!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2008-12-29 03:55 PM

fine imagery, interesting 'write'!

much applause!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-12-29 04:01 PM

Love the way you deliver your messages, dear Ida the Relay Running Poetess!

I enjoyed the visuals, the feel, and the message of this write. I do so enjoy your vignettes!

Love and happiness and joy,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-01-02 09:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-01-02 09:59 PM

Yo dear Ida,

Are you one of Atahualpa's people? Look out for that sneaky Pizzaro guy.

This is very good work.

Love Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2009-01-02 10:01 PM

Dear Ida.. I did so enjoy this wonderful imagery and beautiful words.. thank you

Happy New Year my lovely friend

:HUGS RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-01-02 10:14 PM

...and deliver it well you did...nicely done...lovely write

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2009-01-03 03:25 AM

Thank you all for reading. I appreciate the comments.
Bobby, How very perceptive you are. That's exactly what I once was.
Ida

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