Open Poetry #44 |
My Love Lies Dreaming (terza rima for ARH) |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
My love lies dreaming far from here In slumber, heartbeat growing strong, A pounding pulse I feel so near. I long to rouse her voice in song And bring her shivers in her dreams, The loving touch desired so long. An angel in her sleep she seems Though lust lies under restful eyes, For me she mouths the silent screams. The day will come, I'll fire her cries And send her up into the skies. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"An angel in her sleep she seems Though lust lies under restful eyes, For me she mouths the silent screams." this is beautiful Luke what are the rules for a terza rima? I like this style and would like to try it |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You came to me last night, in dreams, vision, and song, a dream surreal, I could feel, so soft were your touches. Perhaps, I shall write a poem, about our whispered conversations, maybe our words of love together? One day soon, two winters past, our dream will transform into reality~ Warm Love~ ARH |
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