My Love Lies Dreaming (terza rima for ARH)

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Open Poetry #44

My Love Lies Dreaming (terza rima for ARH)

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-04-17 07:05 AM

My love lies dreaming far from here
In slumber, heartbeat growing strong,
A pounding pulse I feel so near.

I long to rouse her voice in song
And bring her shivers in her dreams,
The loving touch desired so long.

An angel in her sleep she seems
Though lust lies under restful eyes,
For me she mouths the silent screams.

The day will come, I'll fire her cries
And send her up into the skies.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-04-17 09:04 AM

"An angel in her sleep she seems
Though lust lies under restful eyes,
For me she mouths the silent screams."

this is beautiful Luke

what are the rules for a terza rima?
I like this style and would like to try it

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2009-04-17 11:01 AM

You came to me last night,
in dreams, vision, and song,
a dream surreal, I could feel,
so soft were your touches.

Perhaps, I shall write a poem,
about our whispered conversations,
maybe our words of love together?

One day soon, two winters past,
our dream will transform into
reality~

Warm Love~
ARH

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