Open Poetry #44 |
Ava Isabella |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
April 14, 2009. Lights, camera, action... She takes her place on the stage. Will she remember past performances as I do? Bit part...or star, holding the audience in the palm of her hand? Will there be someone waiting in the wings with a bouquet of roses? Break a leg, Baby. Ida Werrett |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, I have to ask the question, who is this about. It's a really neat poem. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Bobby, It's about my brand new great granddaughter who just arrived Tuesday. Thanks for appriciating her poem. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, Okay Hon, I get it. They are all stars. Love Bobby |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Good wishes your great granddaughter Ida. Showbiz can be tough, nice write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine tribute to a newborn 'star' ! applause !! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Ida John . |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful name, congratulations great grandma |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Marchmadness - There but for decades of time go I. Congratulations as another generation prepares to be a star and maybe save Mankind. Make us proud Ava. Big smile Marchmadness. Makes one feel young again. Namyh |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I adore this. With my last pregnancy I chose Ava as my girl name. Turned out it was a Gabriel instead He will be 2 tomorrow *sniff sniff* Congratulations! Heather |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is very Good; I like it. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Ida, I didn't post a comment on american because I didn't know whom the poem was talking about, I like it but don't understand the "break a leg" why ? have a nice day yann, |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann, that's just a term, used in the theater, to mean "good luck" Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...wonderful name...congratulations...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this has a daughter-aura to it, so it is quite understandable that it is your granddaughter...they are so special, are they not? nice, emotive write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to planet Earth, Ava Isabella! May your path be a joyful and productive one! Ida, my Belle, this is absolutely precious! Congratulations on the addition of a new star to your stellar family! Love & Baby Light, Linda |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Hey, yes, go break a leg, 'baby'. I'd sooner hobble through life with first-night nerves than wither as a passionless athlete. A new life, an old world. But, a new dream. |
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