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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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dogs laugh at my eating glass talent splitting teeth sneer when it shatters them into dirty prism reflection shards hideous pretty in the caviling light carnival light carnivore light fleas rage sermons confess nothing I grin bloody and gnash some more |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this makes me think of so many different things, but mostly emotions....all of them strong! It's not so much dark as it is powerful and willful...really good.  |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Despite the rather aggressive metaphor of glass eating, I find a 'cool' defiance here. Your talent does you proud; I've been eating glass for years, but without the talent for the task. Your poems have a cryptic and magnetic quality that draws the reader to explore. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
unboundpoetess - I can see where you're poet name comes from for you are 'unbound', and that's a good thing... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting write...love the progression of this: "caviling light carnival light carnivore light" |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thank you, Ms.SEA.I appreciate the feedback. It encourages me as a writer : ) Dear Osprey- Thank you for taking the time to explore. I hope I am not being overly cryptic! I do like for the reader to be able to apply something personal to my own thoughts. And despite the talent, I have a worm's nest of scars to prove every sliver. Aw, thanks BC-I do consider that a compliment. : ) Appreciate you Steaven, and I am happy you found something here to enjoy. Heather |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! that's quite a talent and writing this poem about it is no small talent either. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
unbound...enjoyed this view of you |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Ida- Thank you kindly for the wow Dark- Thanks for looking  |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
I guess I am as thick as a brick on this one. It comes with old age ya know. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Very strong emotions, Heather. Nice write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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