Open Poetry #44 |
I Cannot Help But Wonder |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I Cannot Help But Wonder Thoughts we can never see Unless we choose to reveal I cannot help but wonder How much you conceal With your continued silence Thoughts remain a mystery I cannot help but wonder Were you thinking of me Having thoughts on my mind I am always able to express I cannot help but wonder Did you think of me less Where did your thoughts go Mine I would always convey I cannot help but wonder Have you nothing to say HopeĀ©2009 |
||
© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved | |||
Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww this is beautiful Hope And one i can identify with, I have been divorced twice And no words said are always under question, Thank you for sharing.... |
||
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I wonder too about these mysteries and wish that I didn't wonder at all. |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have often found that if I get my wondering mind out of the way and let my heart do the thinking, I'm much better off! lol Another lovely penning from you, Dear Hope. Sending a big, warm hug, Linda |
||
Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Hope...This is some great poetry. Great rhyme and flow. This will leave me to ponder on something that I have been trying to put out of my mind for a long time. Thanks so much for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Hope, this is a good question, but one I am sure we all know the answer to, none of us always say what we think, we are all human with strange ideas at times, sharing would seem silly then, I know exactly what you are writing about though, I often keep questions silent to myself for not wanting to answer them truthfully. Rick |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Your writing is ALWAYS so lovely~ We are all full of 'wonder'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
||
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Hope.....Makes one wonder when the pieces are missing.....Well written. Eric |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |