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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2009-04-14 06:44 PM


Kiss Me Kim


Then we'll talk
of our future
which will
outshine
our past.
Surely upon
this first kiss
we'll never partake
of our last.


JamesLee
12April
2009
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-14 07:30 PM

Yo James,

Very nice work on this poem.  I'll never forget Kim Novak in "Picnic".

Bobby
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2009-04-16 05:30 PM

James

Good concise work with lots of images for the reader to create.

Eric
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-04-17 06:45 PM

Thank you Robert and ethome for the wonderful responses...James
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2009-04-17 09:38 PM


A cute poem James

And I hope it does last.

Lindsay
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