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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-04-14 08:21 AM


I want to experience the sensation
Of slipping inside your skin
Being all wrapped up within
And losing myself again

You should be like clothes to wear
And here there is no one there
I shall be laid naked and bare
As I lose all earthly cares

Penetration deepest in that way
No travails, no words to say
Just you and me on display
Feeling the other’s sway

We should make all such haste
A mind should not as a body waste
My thoughts to yours displaced
Such a lovely skin inside to taste


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Dog
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1 posted 2009-04-14 09:35 AM


'such a lovely skin inside to taste'
what a way with words, really enjoyed reading that....

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-04-14 09:41 AM


CG, tattooish gentle on the wrongsideout side..enjoyed it
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3 posted 2009-04-14 09:45 AM


"Penetration deepest in that way
No travails, no words to say
Just you and me on display
Feeling the other’s sway"

love it

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2009-04-14 04:41 PM


In my case, it would definitely be winter wear...



But yes, I can relate to the yearning you express here--in a nice way, not like, "Silence of the Lambs".

Because y'see, I know this bri--I mean guy...

Enjoyed, and you'd make some nice vellum yerself. heh-heh.

Chalmette Guy
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5 posted 2009-04-14 04:49 PM


Definitely a nice way Serenity...not a "It puts the lotion on" creepy kinda way. lol
Thanks.

A "bri--" ?

Eirian
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6 posted 2009-04-14 10:13 PM


wow that it awesome, loved it
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2009-04-14 11:44 PM


Chalmette Guy - a telling romantic write, well done...

BC

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8 posted 2009-04-20 11:05 AM


Being all wrapped up within
And losing myself again

Oh, I love this! *S* Losing self in such a way is the best way to really find everything that matters! *S*

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