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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-04-14 07:26 AM



I never would have suggested it was romantic
to be at a coffee house at a mall
in the short skirt side of an afternoon

but then you touched your toe to my leg
and had that look in your eye
like you were playing nonchalottery

and had all of the numbers already
like you were just waiting for a moment
when you could sharon stone my eyes

with some slight of nylon whispering
and then a whispered story over glassy lips
the happy ending is just the beginning kind

before you glanced back toward my wanting


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daark (forbidden)


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Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-04-14 08:24 AM


nonchalottery

Loved this. Very visual.*S*

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-04-14 09:40 AM


thanks CG..
Indigo
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3 posted 2009-04-14 01:29 PM


Guess they haven't closed the Starbucks in your neck of the woods yet...

Personally, I like the "scratch it" lotto tickets best. ;-)  

Indigo


critical mass
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since 2009-03-25
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4 posted 2009-04-14 02:04 PM


liked this a lot.

Nice play with the words.

nonchalottery-I like madeup words.

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-04-14 04:36 PM


ms indi...they are still on every corner here...as for the lotto tickets...the "lick and stick" are kinda fun...so many flavors to choose from..thanks babe


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cm..thanks for the nod!!

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6 posted 2009-04-20 10:53 AM


but then you touched your toe to my leg
and had that look in your eye
like you were playing nonchalottery

and had all of the numbers already

And suddenly, the "where" doesn't matter at all! *S* I love this! *S*

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-04-20 12:54 PM


ms suthern...yessssssssss the "where' is invisible..thanks babe
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