Open Poetry #44 |
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Nature's Renewal . . . (Kyrielle) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
![]() Artist: Adam Jones Nature's Renewal by Linda L. Dowd Thunder is rumbling thru’ distant hills. Rain overflows the country rills. Lightning streaks a roiling spring sky. ~ For Nature’s renewal is nigh. Showers of spring help plant-life grow. Earth drinks deep from spring shower flow. Returning geese go winging by, ~ For Nature’s renewal is nigh. Drab browns and grays will soon be green. All will be fresh, and new, and clean. Flowers will bloom and grass grow high, ~ For Nature’s renewal is nigh. . |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
EA, Linda dear, Your words are true and exciting. The geese are in. The reindeer are having their babies (and I can see them at the University farm). The puddles are deep and icky and fun to drive through. Soon it will be summer - and for now? Well, I am loving the 'breakup'. xoxoxo Alison |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
I liked this. I can't wait for summer. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Could feel the thunder of spring in your words. Awakening is exciting! ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it rained here finally on Sunday, all day rain ![]() really enjoyed this ![]() |
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Dog Junior Member
since 2009-04-09
Posts 48England |
this brings a smile to your face, and that can never be bad, im looking forward to it already ! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Loved this, and the repetition of 'For Nature’s renewal is nigh' is evocative. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Linda, This poem is well written, and well arranged. Love Bobby |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Hey Linda, loved the form and poetic flow of your writing. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Beautiful, just beautiful. Love and Light in return |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I like your take on this form and the promise of summer surely is inviting...once again, a nicely written piece...thank you for sharing this jewel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - let nature ring out and change the white to green. Love spring and all it brings, your poem brings it too... BC |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
What a joy to read your lovely poem, Spring, ah, Spring my husband picked my first Daffodil today. Lucky me. Billie C. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Linda, love the beautiful painting and words are beautifully painted too. We are midst of heavy scorching summer and definitely need some rain for respite. Beautiful write. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Linda isn't Spring a wonderful time of the year, when so much new life appears right across the whole universe, as well as inspiring you to write such a vibrant lovely poem. Love to you my friend and may the sun shine upon you always. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your spring, Linda. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison ~ Thanks for sharing your 'break-up'! It was vital and invigorating! I've always wanted to visit Alaska and your poetry and replies have made the urge grow stronger! Happy spring! Love 'n a springy hug, Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
critical mass ~ It's been a loooong winter! In fact, we have snow predicted for tomorrow! I enjoy all the seasons ~ which are quite dramatic and separate from the other, here in Canada. HOWEVER, winter can drag on a bit too long for my liking! lol ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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ThisDiamond ~ Thanks, TD! I'm glad you could feel it! I was endeavoring to convey the vitality of the spring awakening! ![]() May your spring be a joyous one! ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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SEA ~ I love water in all its forms! ~ and that's a good thang! ~ for where I live, there are lots of rivers, lakes, streams ~ and rain! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Dog ~ Hello, my new canine friend! It was nice to see that you dropped by for a little visit! Keep on smiling! ~ and may spring keep those smiles coming! ![]() ![]() EA |
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since 2002-08-27
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Charming Guy ~ Ooops, 'Chalmette' Guy! ![]() I really like the repetitiveness of the B line in a Kyrielle. I'm pleased that you found repeitition of my B line, "evocative". ![]() Have a happy spring! EA ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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R.E.J. ~ Hi, Bobby! Thanks for the 2 thumbs up! lol ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Suncleaver ~ Howdy do, Luke! So nice to hear from you! Thanks for the nice reply! May your spring be full of 'spring'! lol ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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James ~ Hello, Hawaii Man! Thank you! ~ and your "pleasure" brings me pleasure! lol ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Eirian ~ "Beautiful" is a very beautiful word! Thank you for using it to describe my posting! ![]() Love & Spring Light, EA ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Steaven ~ You've been missed! What a treat it is to receive a reply from you this fine spring day ~ which is proving to be finer by the minute! ![]() May your spring be a pleasant, healing one! ![]() Love and a warm, healing hug, Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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BC ~ It sounds as though you have spring fever as well! ![]() ![]() Big spring hug! Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Billie ~ Yes, lucky you! ~ for having daffodils and for having a sweet husband to pick one for you! ![]() May your spring be a happy one! ~ and it appears to me that it is! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Prasad ~ Dry, hot weather, is the most trying for me. I'm a water person who prefers cool weather. It must be very difficult for you to endure a scorching summer. May your area have the renewal of our cooling spring rains. Love & a 'cool' hug, Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lindsay ~ Yeppers, LP! I'm feeling it! Spring is bringing about my own awakening, as well! I'm rising and shining! lol Love to you, my dear Aussie friend! Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marchmadness ~ I love your spring, as well, my dear Ida Belle! Happy spring love 'n hugs, Linda Lou ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Linda...you spruce up the morning, such a nice awakening! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And nature's renewal renews and refreshes us. *S* Beautiful work, my friend... Happy Spring! *S* |
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