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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2009-04-13 03:09 PM


Like a golden orb of happiness
the setting sun doth shine
but the sun is moving all the time
here to there and then nowhere
and this movement like a lover
determined not to care.

The not to care an evil “thing”
that grabs me by the throat
and squeezes, squeezes, squeezes,
until I backtrack and retreat
into my withdrawal.

And withdrawal is a shady spot;
I recline there like a sloth
on all I hope and wish would be
until finally the moment comes
of the shine within
of a better, greater, grander orb
than ever seen before.

But too that orb is known to move
here to there and then nowhere
because I can’t believe
orbs of happiness can be
independent of life’s happenings!

Helen / 13 April 2009



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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 2009-04-13 04:17 PM


until I backtrack and retreat
into my withdrawal.

I love this... but particularly these lines! *S*

Wishing you an orb of happiness that will encompass all  your life's happenings. *S*

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