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Sleepy River
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Sleepy River |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A new beginning upon a sleepy river, promising tranquility and the gentle currents of safe guidance... Sounds appealing.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Bill...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This has a very special softness, dear Bill, like an invitation to glide along in dreams on this sleepy river. Very beautiful and I love the picture too, though the colors suggest an autumnal scene. But Spring is conveyed in your words, that's enough! Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love how the water is so glassy and tends to mirror loves reflection. Especially enjoyed the feelings that ripple across the page. Nicely done, BC~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This poem is very well presented. Bobby |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Drifting in silent serenity , reflecting the peaceful tranquility ,this was so soothing Hope |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Sounds wonderful and yes, maybe dreaming of something new. I can almost see the fish a "jumpin" Beautiful write with a dreamy picture to boot. Ariana |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Love your river of worlds within |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill I see myself on that river dreaming and fishing. Love the graphics and as always love your poem. This one is one of my favorites. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Bill, As always I enjoyed your words. I live in Idaho not far from the Mighty Snake River and this picture could have been taken from here( altho, I'm sure it is not.) You have a way of finding just the right one to set the scene. Good. Billie C. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Bill! How dreamily wonderful that would be to slip and slide on a slow, sleepy river of dreams!  You poem ~ and the photo ~ are so calming! Thanks! I needed that!  Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Take a bow Bill for that lovely poem was a real delight to read. A beautiful serenic picture that exudes a sense of peace. Very well written. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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