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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Decisions Raindrops falling once again filling corners of this mind. Songs replaying dancing holds, the lingering of, in photos find. Happy days and fruitful times, images in monochrome. The solitude of what to do when time apart fragments the home. No payments needed, no wishful thoughts the gift of which cannot be bought... As coldness settles in the heart, wondering when and if a change will venture in, returning to the feelings of "no longer strange". Mixed emotions, pondering today empty dreams somewhere in hold. The tapping of from reigning thoughts waiting for the dream's unfold. Pictured plays that fill the mind the lingering of, in photos find... As time keeps passing the words beyond, impressions left in lessened feel. For shades of one are darkened now and yesterday seems lost in reel. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"The solitude of what to do when time apart fragments the home." Poignant emoting. Solitude sometimes leaves us with too much reminiscing time. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen, I sure know how this feels. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen You've written this in blues like lyrical fashion. Like the reps. Cool! The content is excellent for the reflective mood you're putting across here. Eric |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
nakdthoughts Very nice. I liked the smooth flow and soft voice in this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Pictured plays that fill the mind the lingering of, in photos find..." ~ and you share them so wistfully ~ and poetically.  Linda |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
I like this. Good work. Please visit my wifes forum. It would mean a lot to her. Thanks http://bride.hyperboards.com/index.php Rick Delmonico |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
There's something so powerful about a photograph, perhaps, even more so than video images. It captures a moment in time and, after all, isn't life merely a collection of such images? All else, past or future. I enjoyed reading your poem, it has strong rhythm, is well-written, and holds a content that I readily relate to, as I read this as reminiscing over old photos. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - decisions at times are very difficult to make. You write of them well... BC |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
An expression of time past and lost and what to do with what you've got. That's what it seems to me. I liked this a lot. One question. Do you mean words or worlds? As time keeps passing the words beyond, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Fizzle, I meant words beyond, meaning there is more to be said or left unsaid  Thanks for the visit.Midnitesun, you are right, the time alone can be harder to get through sometimes when memories rise. Sue, I know you understand  E, I have too much time on my hands right now. It leaves you too much in thought. Thanks. CM, Thank you for commenting. Linda, thanks sweetie . Rick, glad you liked and I did take a peek at your wife's forum. Osprey, enjoyed your comments and thank you for stopping by. BC, I'm tired of having to make decisions today but tomorrow is another day Thank you everyone. M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Songs replaying dancing holds, the lingering of, in photos find. It's so easy to slip into yesterdays... only to wash back into today on our tears... Beautiful write!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Liked the flow here and felt you sharply. Heather |
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