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My Ravenous Hands
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My Ravenous Hands |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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My hands are ravenous Dying but for a morsel Of your skin to feast upon This hunger is like hell The sense is heightened upon fingers I taste with slow deliberate caresses Appetizer of you that gives way To urgent squeezes and pressures Life giving, nourishing flesh To cup and cradle, knead and roll Nothing the hands wish for more Your skin consumed, entire and whole Sustenance that comes in waves Rhythmic all encompassing delight Greedy hands feeding hungrily Devouring all of you within sight |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like a good time to me!  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Well SEA, good times are...well, good. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I taste with slow deliberate caresses Appetizer of you that gives way" ~ I wish that I was a little h'ordeuvre, right about now!   Linda |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
lol thank you EA....consider yourself a tasty treat to me. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hot~ in here! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Kathy...hot > cold right? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ummm, did someone kick the thermostat up? Thanks for the warmup, mon ami. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So nice to have that sensuous life giving but relaxing feeling. Good work. Eric |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Chalmette Guy - Somebody turn down the lights of lust to stop the sweating. This was absorbing. Enjoyed. Namyh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Like a great yeasty full bread, this was indeed fulfilling. Well done, Sir! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
From title through last line... a build of heat so beckoning, so enticing: Your skin consumed, entire and whole Sustenance that comes in waves Rhythmic all encompassing delight Greedy hands feeding hungrily Devouring all of you within sight And what a way to go!! *S* Wowser!!! This is FANtastic! *S* |
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