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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-04-10 02:36 PM


My hands are ravenous
Dying but for a morsel
Of your skin to feast upon
This hunger is like hell
The sense is heightened upon fingers
I taste with slow deliberate caresses
Appetizer of you that gives way
To urgent squeezes and pressures
Life giving, nourishing flesh
To cup and cradle, knead and roll
Nothing the hands wish for more
Your skin consumed, entire and whole
Sustenance that comes in waves
Rhythmic all encompassing delight
Greedy hands feeding hungrily
Devouring all of you within sight


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SEA
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1 posted 2009-04-10 02:53 PM


sounds like a good time to me!
Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-04-10 02:56 PM


Well SEA, good times are...well, good.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-04-10 03:00 PM


"I taste with slow deliberate caresses
Appetizer of you that gives way"

~ I wish that I was a little h'ordeuvre, right about now!


Linda

Chalmette Guy
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4 posted 2009-04-10 03:01 PM


lol
thank you EA....consider yourself a tasty treat to me.

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5 posted 2009-04-10 03:06 PM


Hot~ in here!
Chalmette Guy
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6 posted 2009-04-10 03:12 PM


Thank you Kathy...hot > cold right?
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7 posted 2009-04-10 05:46 PM


Ummm, did someone kick the thermostat up?
Thanks for the warmup, mon ami.

ethome
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8 posted 2009-04-10 06:07 PM


So nice to have that sensuous life giving but relaxing feeling.

Good work.

Eric

Namyh
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9 posted 2009-04-10 09:44 PM


Chalmette Guy - Somebody turn down the lights of lust to stop the sweating. This was absorbing. Enjoyed. Namyh
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10 posted 2009-04-10 10:10 PM


Like a great yeasty full bread,
this was indeed fulfilling.

Well done, Sir!


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11 posted 2009-04-13 10:37 AM


From title through last line... a build of heat so beckoning, so enticing:

Your skin consumed, entire and whole
Sustenance that comes in waves
Rhythmic all encompassing delight
Greedy hands feeding hungrily
Devouring all of you within sight

And what a way to go!! *S*

Wowser!!! This is FANtastic! *S*

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