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Open Poetry #44

She is a Sonnet

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-04-10 08:24 AM

She is a sonnet laid out, black and white
Fingers to trace the letters one by one
Eyes to devour her lines with pure sight
And a mouth to speak her tale that is spun

O but what I would give to have these things
As surely want as the same as to need
Breathing her words that bewitched heralds sing
And my love of words from her she will feed

In still deep waters her depths bottomless
From cradle to the grave I feel for her
My thoughts as I read her are limitless
And the patterns she weaves cause me to stir

That which would kill are but words in my head
Not the things she does, yet of what she said

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-04-10 08:59 AM

Take a bow, poet.
Library keeper....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-04-10 09:00 AM

she must be very good then

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2009-04-10 04:03 PM

~What a compliment!

~ARH

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2009-04-10 05:32 PM

incredible

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-04-10 05:44 PM

This is just excellent poetry writing.

You have a poet's mind and that comes in real handy around here.
I wish I had the same but I just don't. Too much songwriter.

Enjoyable read.

Eric

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-04-13 10:21 AM

If I were a songwriter, I could just chime in with a "me, too!" for ethome's comments. *S*

Fingers to trace the letters one by one
Eyes to devour her lines with pure sight
And a mouth to speak her tale that is spun

Pure enchantment... perfect write... Beautiful work!

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