Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Plays Guard Dog For Griselda |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
The club where Griselda dances is under new management. Griselda thinks they’re nuts, but she wants the money. The new boss is no longer satisfied with Griselda dancing with just a pair of pasties, and a “G”-string. The new boss wants Griselda to cover her body with baby oil, so that her beautiful, God given, olive skin just gleams, and shines, under the hot lights on her stage. Griselda is afraid she looks too good. Griselda is afraid some of the patrons might get the idea into their head to try and touch her. She asks Bones to come along and make sure nothing like that happens. Bones shows up wearing his Fedora, and cleaning his nails with his favorite stiletto. There’s no problem from the patrons. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo guys and dolls. It's okay too look, just don't touch. Love Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am glad he was there for her. -Juju |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's nice that she at least had someone looking out for her....that can be a dangerous job. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he you make me smile many times Bobby. I like the images out of such a concise storyline. Good scene, I was waiting for the movie to start. Have a good day Bobby. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, Yes, it was good Bones was there. Bones and Griselda look out for each other. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear SEA, Yes, it can be dangerous, a girl can get in a lot of trouble sometimes, if they're not careful. My Girlfriend used to dance when we were younger. Now her Granddaughter dances, and the Girlfriend doesn't approve. I always take the Granddaughters part, and remind her that she used to do that too. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bones has always got his friends' backs covered! ~ and he does it with style! lol Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, That's a nice thing to say about Bones. Bones really does do the best he can for his friends, because thay sometimes take care of him. He'd be lost without them. Love Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bones shows up wearing his Fedora, and cleaning his nails with his favorite stiletto. There’s no problem from the patrons. He's watching out for her... as he knows she'd do the same. Friends... the family you choose. *S* |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A touching story and very poetically told. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, I love what you say, and that expression is a gem. "Friends... the family you choose." That is so true Hon. I'm going to steal that saying sometime when you're not looking. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Poddarku, I'm very pleased that you found the story touching. Thanks for the very kind words on the poem. Bobby |
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