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vibrant forgiveness |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is morning opening her long leg dawn and stepping wide from her sports car horizon she is fresh bathed from the night fires her simmering sensuality is dew wet witnessed and then you are there with your smile songs where the sun touches your teeth and plays notes only a lover could hear those sounds but you smile slow and give me the opportunity I kneel to worship within the temple of your eyes but you realize my sins are far to vibrant to forgive so you close your gaze around me and press me still against your bosom altar as if I was sacrificial you wear my hands over your charms like wet ink and moan out loud how the smearing of identity feels drinking love's water from the lips of another lover while your thirst has already been quenched the want to be drunk on another man's liquor lingers _____________ daark (wishbine whiskey) |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Deep and meaningful poem I really enjoyed reading it Thank you for sharing..  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you annie for the read.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and moan out loud how the smearing of identity feels drinking love's water from the lips of another lover while your thirst has already been quenched I don't just read your poems... I fall into them... and enjoy every bump and bruise. *S* Powerful punch of pen here!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern,,,,you look so cute with the tattoos..thanks babe |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this scorches in the sacred of decadence |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Dark Stranger morning opening her long leg dawn from her sports car horizon you wear my hands over your charms like wet ink and moan out loud how the smearing of identity feels Pretty good stuff here, liked it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...you bless me babe, thank you ____________ cm, thanks for the read and write.. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a sensually impressive write...found this stanza to be absolutely stunning...loved its layers: "I kneel to worship within the temple of your eyes but you realize my sins are far to vibrant to forgive so you close your gaze around me and press me still against your bosom altar as if I was sacrificial" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - sensual, and enjoyed reading this... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks amigo ___________ bc, thanks bill |
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