Open Poetry #44 |
No Such Thing |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
No Such Thing With you, there's no such thing as a wasted moment of time within you there's no such need for a warning sign I'm not afraid of anything I'll find inside your heart or mind With you, I feel so sure of the songs I've yet to pen all for you you can feel secure love without an end in the pages of my heart left open find what you need within No such thing as a long enough minute to spend sitting here with you, smitten and clumsily devoted to the way the hairs on my neck stand on end whenever you bend this precious time for me, my sweet willow tree With you, there's no such place that wouldn't feel just like home I've seen you beyond a lovely face your brilliant light shown I felt the fire warming these old bones sing to me in sweet tones No such thing as a long enough lifetime to spend being here with you, smitten and forever devoted to the way the hairs on my neck stand on end whenever you send your precious love to me, my sweet honey bee No such thing with you, there's no such thing as a wasted note to sing no such thing as an end to this wellspring within me and there's no such thing I'm not afraid of anything And there's no such thing no such thing "Alone: that ain't the word, it's just a groan in the morning nobody ever heard" --Justin Currie, 'Gold Dust' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a beautiful song of love to last, dear Zach. The repetition sounds good here. Love, Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
No such thing as a long enough minute to spend sitting here with you, smitten and clumsily devoted to the way the hairs on my neck stand on end whenever you bend this precious time for me, my sweet willow tree You sigh me with your words, soul drifter. This got even better and better as I read. Nice to meet you. Heather |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not afraid of anything I'll find inside your heart or mind I like the whole poem but particularly love these lines... when you know enough to know you can learn everything without being disappointed... that's so special. *S* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I always look forward to reading you. this is so loving |
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