Open Poetry #44 |
When I Was Loving You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*SIGHS* ahhha Bill... this is such perfection... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And that's what we are meant to do, dear Bill! Love, love, love ... that is time well spent, to remember forever. Very captivating and to the point! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well now, that's simple, straightforward, uncomplicated. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Love is unmistakeable. Lovely picture, by the way. ~Maranda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Picture and verse both cute Bill, Quite a story with such few words. cheers . Lindsay |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very Nice, Bill, as always, You put poem to picture quite well. Tracey. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bill this is lovely...thanks for sharing yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Perfect Bill, love the artwork, too! M |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So few words, and yet so much said Bill. Beautifully succinct and wonderfully penned. Much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill There is nothing as precious as loving someone and that someone returning that love. You have captured this in just a few words with a beautiful picture. Oh such wonderful memories!! Enjoyed. Ariana |
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varun Junior Member
since 2009-04-05
Posts 13Punjab,India |
The poem is Short and Nice... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
yes yes and YES! *S* |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is beautiful Bill. I don't believe anything compares to the love shared between a man and a woman. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a fine presentation. That's the way it should always be. Bobby |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...and so the story grows! This says so much. In a few rhymical words lies the expanse of heart held in someone else's hand. I really like this. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful and classy Bill that's all I can say. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, let the good times begin! ~ again! Sorry, I couldn't help myself! I got caught up in the spirit of the write! Linda |
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