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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-04-07 03:10 PM


When I Was Loving You

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1 posted 2009-04-07 03:14 PM


*SIGHS*


ahhha Bill...

this is such perfection...


Margherita
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2 posted 2009-04-07 04:55 PM


And that's what we are meant to do, dear Bill! Love, love, love ... that is time well spent, to remember forever.

Very captivating and to the point!

Love,
Margherita

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2009-04-07 05:00 PM


Well now, that's simple, straightforward, uncomplicated.  Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

angellea
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4 posted 2009-04-07 10:33 PM


Love is unmistakeable. Lovely picture, by the way.

~Maranda

LindsayP
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5 posted 2009-04-08 01:22 AM



Picture and verse both cute Bill,

Quite a story with such few words.
cheers .

Lindsay

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6 posted 2009-04-08 09:32 AM


Very Nice, Bill, as always,
You put poem to picture quite well.

Tracey.

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-04-08 11:45 AM


Hello Bill this is lovely...thanks for sharing

yann

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2009-04-08 06:01 PM


Perfect Bill, love the artwork, too!


M

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2009-04-09 06:15 AM


So few words, and yet so much said Bill. Beautifully succinct and wonderfully penned. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ariana
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10 posted 2009-04-09 11:22 AM


Bill

There is nothing as precious as loving someone and that someone returning that love.  You have captured this in just a few words with a beautiful picture.  Oh such wonderful memories!!  Enjoyed.

Ariana

varun
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11 posted 2009-04-09 12:07 PM


The poem is Short and Nice...
suthern
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12 posted 2009-04-09 02:18 PM


yes

yes

and

YES! *S*

Suncleaver
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13 posted 2009-04-09 06:06 PM


This is beautiful Bill.

I don't believe anything compares to the love shared between a man and a woman.

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-04-09 07:06 PM


Yo Bill,

This is a fine presentation.

That's the way it should always be.

Bobby

Klassy Lassy
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15 posted 2009-04-10 01:22 AM


...and so the story grows!  

This says so much.  In a few rhymical words lies the expanse of heart held in someone else's hand.  

I really like this.  

ethome
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16 posted 2009-04-10 02:18 AM


Beautiful and classy Bill that's all I can say.

Eric

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2009-04-10 11:35 AM


Well, let the good times begin! ~ again!

Sorry, I couldn't help myself! I got caught up in the spirit of the write!


Linda

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