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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2009-04-06 11:45 AM


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So Prince
Another night
Spent in feminine
Divertissement

Her perfume touched
With a scent of sweat
Cloys the air
As by candlelight
You write
An obligatory poem

Since no one
Really matters
All that much
One might as well
Enjoy someone else
As wealth with looks
Can easily afford

Right
And wrong
Are for the plain
Virile paragon

The only
Moral imperative
For the pretty
Is they not be bored


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2009-04-06 01:45 PM


Yo John,

Being pretty is a heavy enough burden.  Being bored would make it almost intolerable.

Bobby

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Gaia
2 posted 2009-04-06 07:30 PM


Courtisans and geishas are educated to know this 'truth'.
Huan Yi
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3 posted 2009-04-06 07:51 PM


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Thank you both.

Kaci,

This was my first response
to beginning to again reading: "The Tale of Genji"
(as translated by Arthur Waley this time),
which probably continues to reflect
as before my Catholic upbringing,
( it contains an allusion to a comment
by Evelyn Waugh as well as touching on
the social philosophy embedded in:
“The Picture of Dorian Gray”
by Oscar Wilde).


Thanks again,

John

PS I didn't expect it
to be popular.


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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2009-04-07 05:15 PM


I loved Arthur Waley's Translations from the Chinese I think it was.  Anyway, I kept it out of the library forever, and had to pay a $5.00 fine when I finally brought it back.  I was so tempted to tell them I'd lost it, and just pay for the book.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2009-04-09 08:01 PM


:Fine writing...James
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