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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2009-04-05 11:49 PM



Drinking dead mans water
With a cold race to run
My heart has died
The beat has gone dead
What girl do I want now?
She’s disappeared from my head
I haven’t got anywhere
The girl that put me like this
Is her heart really on fire?
Or is it freezing in this dead dark

The night has a bleeding heart
My heart has nothing left
Is this a story or a dream?
Will I live this memory out?
My dreams have become hard to achieve
How will I figure this out?

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State of constant confusion!
1 posted 2009-04-05 11:53 PM


"The night has a bleeding heart"

Loved, LOVED, this line and congrats on your 100th post

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2009-04-06 12:14 PM


Life is interesting, you never know what it means.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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